a cynical viewall i could see was the rain, trickling down to its last drops as for my feelings; they never ceased to stop.a cynical view
all i could see was the end. as the flames consumed me no more rain to wash them away all i had was nothing.
all i could see was him looking back at me. with a hurried goodbye, after which, he left the scene.
all i could see was a box. and when i opened it up, it was. empty.
i let the rain drops fall onto me as all
MineHold me tight Under the moonlit night And in my room We'll be happy For now.Mine
I wish you didn't Have to leave I know you Wish it too. I just want To fall asleep With the one I love To protect me.
I'm so glad That you are
My cowboy, My Grace, My lover And more. And I know you love Being my dirty little secret.
So move closer, And cuddle up. And don't let me go Until we've run out of luck. I love how You love me too.
Orochimaru
Anna
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First, thanks for saying it’s a poem “straight from the heart”. Sometimes I feel like I can’t really express what I’m feeling and it’s good to know it actually worked out well.
Then I agree with you when you say that the end could be better. As you probably read on the description I don’t like this poem very much and the main reason I put it here was to get some ideas so thanks again for giving me one.
On the other hand, about the first stanza, I have to disagree. It was actually how the whole poem started and I think it’s the one that truly expresses what I mean to say.
Last but not least: “renewed sure”. I wanted to say “renewed hope” but it would obviously sound too repetitive. So the actual meaning is “the certainty that I have that being love a hell it is the best way for me o survive and the best f***ing feeling in the whole world”. Hope you got it now.
Thanks again for reading and for the suggestion. I’m glad you liked it.
Janus
Thanks.
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